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I just felt like it.

Posted by sherockachild22 - October 15th, 2008


As he looked up into my face with his pleeding brown eyes,
I could see the stregth flowing from his gut with his blood.
Any person that walked past seemingly lost in their own world could tell what was happening.
Even a blind man could see it.
Like a candle at the end of its life, so was he at the end of his.
His hands clasped in mine, he lay there staring into my face waiting to tell me.
Waiting to share what was burdening his heart so deep in his chest.
But i gave him a nod, letting him know that i already knew,
His world had been suspended on the thin intertwined strings of a web.
Saving him from the fall... Saved from the perils below.
His snow white face relaxed a bit, but we still knew what was to come in the next minutes.
His face so white as death was upon him, he said 'goodbye beautiful', gave my hand a slight squeeze, blinked away the last of his tears, he fell into rest.
And is face was a picture of peace, he had drifted into uncharted waters.
His soul never to be seen roaming this world again, never to go through any hardships again.
He is never to be forgotten, he died a hero.

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By the way nobody died, well nobody I really knew.

I just felt like it.


Comments

This sounds awfully poetic and tragic...

It...KINDA...reminds me of the death of Beuwolf in that Dreamworks movie.

What inspired you may I ask?

I seems like your into the whole...epic story feel now...

maybe you should write a story! You've already got the warriors code thing going...maybe you can write an epic story...based on the emotions of yourself.

a fierce an arrogant knight
a wise an nobel princess
a wise dragon
an evil king that was cursed
the grim reaper
rock golems

whatever!

I think you could be the next JK Rowling.

I want you to write something and by all means...don't worry about spelling, grammar, or content.

Remember that one scene in that "Finding William Forester" movie...staring Sean Connery?

"Don't think...just write"

It does sound awfully poetic... just my way i guess..

Hm, i've never seen that movie...

Eh, my inspiration just came from my head? Um, i don't know...
I started rambling to myself about 'with his dark brown eyes he looked into mine...'

I have been into that sort of thing for a little bit, i use to write murder and the alike for my school stories... I like this better though, i'm over the murder stories now,
although they are interesting.... :3

Haha, that would be wishful thinking.. But it would be cool. :D

Ohhh.. Yeah?

That can be my saying now. :)

Thats how I'd like to die...but thats just wishful thinking.

Um, well i want to die before i become a vegie.... but that is also wishful thinking.
But you know, some wishes come true. :)
And wishful thinking brings the mood up from the depths of the blue sea.