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Could it be so wrong?

Posted by sherockachild22 - October 17th, 2008


Even if we think we are so much worse,
If we hold them so high on their pedistal.
That we think our love is nothing more than a weak echo of what we are personally capable of.
If we really want them, it wouldn't only be an echo, it would be a full scream of our love.
When we feel that our heart is far away, wandering and staggering through the barren land we call our lives, made from their lies of happy endings.
Thinking our heart will never stop grieving or never stop walking after our fickle Romeo.
Could it be so wrong but to give up, walk away?
Keep our hearts at bay?
Although, to let it wander and feel for itself is what is important...
Could it be so wrong?

Could it be so wrong?


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Fickle Romeo?

I may need to re-read this poem a couple of times...I'm awfully confused. (@_@)

You know...funny thing...I actually wrote a segment on what I though Love was a couple of days ago...
<a href="http://jakbaronking.newgrounds.com/news/post/209351">http://jakbaronking.newgrounds.com/ne ws/post/209351</a>

Okay...rereading...hmmm....mua-huaa..
.uhh huh....

OH I get-em now!

The one you love we hold with much regard...we tell him/her our love so much...but it's like talking to an hallow shell (echo). You grieve because that person does not return the feelings.

The Fickle Romeo is like this man who plays with women's hearts...pretends to love them to gain the satisfaction for his own masculine vanity.

While all the while hurting those who feel strongly for him.
And the person in love questioning whether or not to keep loving someone who does not return the feeling.

Kinda like "The Little Mermaid" (Danish: Den lille havfrue) by Poet Hans Christian Anderson.

A good story...tells the TRUTH about "One-Sided" love.

"You can go as far as accomplish the impossible to be with the one you love...but just because your with him...does not mean he loves you."

Then she dies and the foam in the ocean is her tears...sigh...sad.

We not me, it was just something on my mind, just to write about it...
But yes, thats what i'm getting at.

Yes the little mermaid is the perfect explination for it all.

That is sad. :(

I'm sorry...I wasn't implying that this poem directly relates to you...

"We not me"

I was writing in context, not necessarily about yourself.

Gotcha. :)