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sherockachild22
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ha., i'm not emo for your info.

Posted by sherockachild22 - September 18th, 2009


Tears stained her face, 'I do not beleive' he repeated.
Too bad they couldn't see that she wasn't breathing...

These dreams had driven her insane, she would cry, she would run.
But they would follow.

Defeated by the world, the constant pounding of their fists on her chest.
Yet still they did not believe, each knock was deadly.

Poison mixed with passion.
All that is left is but ash to what once stood.

Forced to live in the shadow before her.
She gave up.

She felt alive in that moment, where she didn't have to anything.
So she ran.

And she says;
"Fuck, bust your lungs and blow your brain."

ha., i'm not emo for your info.


Comments

Sounds like you just went down by a killer wave.

You taking up water sports of some kind? It'll be so awesome if you started surfing.

The whole metaphore of the waves pounding against you? Going against the current. Then to be swallowed up by the ocean's unmerciful waters.

You must've been down their quite a long time.

Nice photo btw.

Or is that not what your talking about?

Something I learned form the killers band -The awesome thing about poetry is that It can be interpreted many ways, be very powerful, and be right. If you write abstract feeling and you have the skill to covey it so that the reader feels something than it doesn't mater what the reader interprets it as ...as long as you've touched them in some way.

Listen to the killers "good night travel well"* and you'll no what I mean. Even if you have a specific idea when writing.

* <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KG1MezAd2nw#movie_player">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KG1Mez Ad2nw#movie_player</a>

By the way that song is the very definition of EPIC! play it loud. :D

i like songs that are good to play loud. :D